New Story: Toby See The Stars

Knocked up a short story on Friday evening. It comes in around 1000 words, and was born on or around 1 AM after three JDs and Coke.

It needs a little work, but I’m quite happy with it. It’s been nice to knock out something in a short period of time – and reflects how my last story died on its feet when I got all overwrought about the plot (which I was never truly happy with anyway…)

Update: Another edit. It’s all come together very nicely. A few more passes and I think this one is ready to sell. Nice one.