This is the rejection I got from GUD Magazine for Warp Factory
“ending section is really weak (in concept and writing). and too long
getting there, for what it is. not to mention the lack of editing
(there’s even a section still in third person that obviously wasn’t
meant to be)… it’s definitely colorful and freaky and cleverly-put
and all that good stuff, but not enough payoff imo, especially to give
a quarter of an issue to. and…neurolinguistic programming?!? come
on, al, you can do better than that!”
One word.
Smug.
Last time I submit there.
